Ah, it's the Licker Picker
Beware, when you hear it
Growl and snicker.
He'll gobble up your
Clothes and you'll be
Trapped in the snow, so
Run away into
The mysterious unknown!
Beware, when you hear it
Growl and snicker.
He'll gobble up your
Clothes and you'll be
Trapped in the snow, so
Run away into
The mysterious unknown!
What I liked about my writing is the way I used the action verbs like "gobble", "growl" and "snicker". It helps the story sound more alive to the reader!
4 comments:
Isaac, I like this poem? Were you inspired by our huge baskets filled with clothes? Ha ha! I love you, keep up the good work. Love, Mom
What a cool poem, Isaac. It is kind of scary and funny at the same time and you used some really great words! Some day I will be able to tell people that I am the Nana to the famous writer, Isaac Ries. Love, Nana
Cool Poem Isaac! I'll be looking for some more next tuesday! Maybe you can give me some tips? :)
Isaac,
Great job! I am going to start visiting your blog now that I've found it. It's fun to hear the things you're writing. Love you, Aunt Jen
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