This a story about a skunk named Billy and a giant named Sululu (Sue Lou).
There once was a skunk named Billy. Billy was a spy. He was a spy because there was a giant in the forest named Sululu. Sululu was the most horrible, dreadful giant you had ever seen! Smashed the animals' homes and they cried! He even demolished Billy's house, but that didn't stop Billy. No Sirree! Because Billy was a skunk he kept making Sululu's eyes swell up by spraying him. Now Sululu was the one who was crying. One day a woman gave Sululu a magic drink. It looked like ordinary water and tasted like soda, but it made Sululu shrink to adult size! He became the forest wood-cutter. Billy the spy skunk continued spraying Sululu, the man, and Sululu kept on running with his sollen eyes shut. THE END
This was a very long process of writing this stories. It took me two days to make it completely finshed. I am so proud of myself for getting this done. It was hard but definitely worth it.
Thursday, February 8, 2007
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4 comments:
Isaac,
I liked the part about Sululu becoming a wood cutter when he drank a magic potion that he thought was just soda pop! You've got a great imagination!
Love, Ms. Becky
Way to go!!! Your story has all the elements that make a good story...adventure, secrets, imaginative characters. I'm proud of you!
Love,
Mom
It's hard to write stories. Sometimes I don't know what should come next. You did a great job.
I especially liked the skunk...a lot of the stories I make up have animals in them! Keep up the good work. Love, Nana
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