Thursday, February 8, 2007

Ice Twins Part 2 by Hannah

This is part 2 of the Ice Twins. You should go back and reread part 1 so that you know what is going on if you forgot.

Part 2: When the ship landed, they were marched out. They were locked up inthe cages and loaded on another ship. When that ship landed, they were carried to the evil doctor's lab. The cages were put in a prison cell. The next day, Jiggley Puff (Ice Twin one's poke'mon) got the keys. She had sliped out of her cage. Finally they escaped. They went back to the lab and decided to make their own copies that would hlep them. A copy is a clone. Ice Twin three and four were operating the machine. When they were made, it wasn't as good as they had planned. Ice Twin three had accidently pushed the wrong button and the copies started throwing things all over the place! The Ice Twins had to sell them to the evil doctor in descise. Then, they got captured again. They were in the cages again. They Found a stick and got the keys! They were chased by the evil doctor all the way to Hawaii and were forced to do that Hula Dance by some dancers. Then the dancers took off their head costumes and it was the evil dotor and their pathetic copies. They started surfing and out-ran the evil doctor so they thought, but the wave got too big. They landed in a vulcher's nest. Then the vulchers took off their head costumes and it was the copies. Then, they were forced off the side of the cliff and landed in Star-world. They went into the wrong mirror. There are a lot of mirrors in start world. They went to Star Wars land and met Luke, Leia, Darth Vader, and the Emperor! "Eeck!", they said. The Ice twins lived in Star Wars for a long time, hoping they could have a little break before they have to save the world from evil again!

This story took me a long time to write, edit, and revise! That is why I haven't posted in a while. I have been working on this the whole time! I learned that it doesn't matter if you're the fastest at writing, it just matters that you do a good job on it!

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