Thursday, February 8, 2007

Superheros by Isaac

This is a poem I got from superheros like Spiderman. It is a cinquain.

Superheros.
Brave, strong,
Saving, fighting, punching,
Hero.

I just like how I got to write about something I like.

Lightbulb Trouble by Hannah

I got this idea from having such naughty brothers :)

Am I having a great time in thie lightbulb? NO! Absolutely not! I've been stuck in this lightbulb since a quarter past 9am and outside of the lightbulb all my brothers say is "play, play, play"!

I really like this poem because it's about my brothers. Hope you liked it!

Ice Twins Part 2 by Hannah

This is part 2 of the Ice Twins. You should go back and reread part 1 so that you know what is going on if you forgot.

Part 2: When the ship landed, they were marched out. They were locked up inthe cages and loaded on another ship. When that ship landed, they were carried to the evil doctor's lab. The cages were put in a prison cell. The next day, Jiggley Puff (Ice Twin one's poke'mon) got the keys. She had sliped out of her cage. Finally they escaped. They went back to the lab and decided to make their own copies that would hlep them. A copy is a clone. Ice Twin three and four were operating the machine. When they were made, it wasn't as good as they had planned. Ice Twin three had accidently pushed the wrong button and the copies started throwing things all over the place! The Ice Twins had to sell them to the evil doctor in descise. Then, they got captured again. They were in the cages again. They Found a stick and got the keys! They were chased by the evil doctor all the way to Hawaii and were forced to do that Hula Dance by some dancers. Then the dancers took off their head costumes and it was the evil dotor and their pathetic copies. They started surfing and out-ran the evil doctor so they thought, but the wave got too big. They landed in a vulcher's nest. Then the vulchers took off their head costumes and it was the copies. Then, they were forced off the side of the cliff and landed in Star-world. They went into the wrong mirror. There are a lot of mirrors in start world. They went to Star Wars land and met Luke, Leia, Darth Vader, and the Emperor! "Eeck!", they said. The Ice twins lived in Star Wars for a long time, hoping they could have a little break before they have to save the world from evil again!

This story took me a long time to write, edit, and revise! That is why I haven't posted in a while. I have been working on this the whole time! I learned that it doesn't matter if you're the fastest at writing, it just matters that you do a good job on it!

Isaac's Cinquain

This is a cinquain poem. I got the idea from a Junie B. Jones book called "Cheater Pants". Hope you like it!

Glass.
Sharp, shinny,
Splintering, hurting, admiring,
It is very useful.
Crystal.

I use books to get ideas for writing. The class in the book was writing cinquains and I wanted to try one of my own. The book told you how to write one and I had to use a Thesaurus on the computer.

My Mom by Isaac (and his mom)

This is a poem about my mom. The word "spacey" isn't suposed to be mean. We made the poem up together.

My mom's name is Tracey.
She is kind of spacey.
Her name isn't Tom. And
She doesn't wear pom poms.

I just liked writing this poem because she's the greatest mom in the whole wide world!

Squishy the Jelly Fish by Isaac

This is a poem, again, which I made up about a jelly fish. I know that a jelly fish cannot squirt a cloud of ink, but that's ok. It's just pretend.

Squishy is a jellyfish.
He is kind of shyish.
He is also childish.
Squishy can squirt a cloud
Of ink. It can make fishs sink.
Squishy will never say Hi, he'll just say bye, bye!

It took a long time to type but it was worth it because I really like it.

Hearts and Sweettarts

This poem is about candy.

Hearts and Sweettarts, Hearts and Sweettarts
Oh how sweet the taste. What
a day we say Horray! for all the people we
love, love, love!


I'm not quite sure what this means, it just came to my head. I like that it rhymes.